Thursday, January 31, 2013

Should Traditional High School Education Move Away from Large, Expensive & Inefficient Buildings? Take the Survey Below.

     "The internet has revolutionized the planet." We hear this all the time but why do we still spend vast amounts of money on these inefficient and -at least some would say - prison-like buildings to house hundreds and sometimes thousands of students, many of whom do not want to be there? Is there a better solution? Can technology offer something better?

The Martin Luther King Educational Complex, Manhattan,
houses six small schools



     When I used to cover communities as a news reporter in Massachusetts, the one common complaint I heard from school and city administrators was that the schools were like bottomless pits that consumed about 80% of the city's or town's budgets. They would shake their heads at this perceived waste. Times have changed and the world's libraries and storehouses of knowledge are now available in the palm of your hand. So why do we continue to throw huge piles of money into the bottomless pits?
     Or is the old 'true-and-tried way' still the best way? Can we save a pile of money and have a much better educational system at the same time by replacing old modes of education with the opportunities that the new technologies afford?
     Students, parents, city and town officials, administrators and teachers-would you kindly take a few minutes to answer this survey? Please click on the button below. Thank you. The results will be posted on this website. Look for notification of the results via Twitter, Facebook and G+. The results may be used in a possible future book.

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Wednesday, January 30, 2013

The Quandary of the Self-publisher or Shameless Self-promotion but Someone has to Do It


Win a $100 Amazon or Barnes & Noble Gift Certificate and a Free Book by answering questions about my new blog and reading this brief article:


              Building Your blog Site Using Google’s Web Designs in Blogger

I thought I had a great looking blog site-and I did-until I stumbled upon a new combination of structure and color as I was experimenting with Blogger tools the other day. The result after only ten minutes or so was - well, in my own very modest opinion - stunning.
Don’t believe it? Well, okay, you be the judge then. Can you make anything look this good with Word Press? I’ve tried that platform a few times and haven’t had much luck. Maybe it’s just a matter of preference and I suppose it’s all very subjective but, from this vantage point, I greatly prefer Blogger. Please respond to this post at the bottom of the article as to what you think about the effectiveness of this new blog style and structure.

"Tree House Disappearance:" Continuation of the Serialized Novel, "Jack," about the Antebellum South



                                                    Chapter Three 
                   The Tree House Disappearance 



Charleston, S.C. during the Civil War. Charleston Harbor in background.
Civil War Era lithograph published by Harper's Weekly.
Public Domain.
     And one day, Jack fully dismantled Mike’s tree house down the path from his house-actually it was Jack and me who done the dismantlin' after Jack convinced me that my presence and assistance was imperative. We rebuilt it across the river in a secret place and put up a stockade around the tree to keep the Indians from attackin' us if they had a mind to. Although no-one in our parts had been attacked by Indians that I knew of, they were sure attackin' the settlers out west. At least that’s what Jack said. They would charge on their horses a'hollerin' and a'screamin' and shooting their arrows and a’throwin their tomahawks just when you least expected it and the next thing you knew you was dead. That’s what Jack said. He didn't  read the newspapers because he couldn't read too good but he talked to people on the river and he knew everyone on the river, and so he got all the news a’fresh, before the newspapers even had a hint of what was going on. “So what's the sense in reading newspapers?” said Jack. “You can’t believe everything you read anyway.” He had a point.
     Anyway, Jack and I used the tree house all the time takin' care whenever we went there that no-one followed. Because if anyone got wind of the fact that Mike’s tree-house had been resettled across the river and that Jack and I did the resettlin', we’d have to leave town or forever live under the shame of knowin' that everyone knew who done it. Jack probably wouldn’t care but I would.

                                                    Chapter Four 
                                            Mike
     So Jack had this secret power over me. Whenever Mike was around, Jack would make obscure references to the snitchin' and smile at me when Mike wasn't looking. For instance he’d say, “Hey puke-face (he called Mike this and many other contemptuous names), we’re going across the river today to our secret fort! Wanna come?”
     And Mike would say, “Hey pig-face, I wouldn’t go to the slop-pen with you and who cares about your secret fort. What’s so secret about it anyway and who cares?”
     “Well you’d care if you were there but you’ll never know because we’re not going to reveal its location to a mealy-mouthed little pipsqueak like yourself,” said Jack.


Tuesday, January 29, 2013

"Jack": Continuation of the Serialized Novel


  "A man never rises so high as when he knows not whither he is going.”                                              
                                                             - Oliver Cromwell      
                                                                              
                               JACK

                  The Battle is Joined     


 Charleston, S.C.,   during the Civil War, 
Charleston Harbor
 in background. Civil War
era lithograph
     Crawling up alongside the red wooden façade of the schoolhouse, Jack and me peeked through the windows and scanned the room. There was Mike seated on one end of a bench, paying the strictest attention to master’s lesson.
     “The sniveling little worm,” Jack said, scrunching up his nose. “I knew he didn’t have the nerve to skip,” said Jack. “Next, he’ll be kissing Whittemore’s ass-the little worm.”
     “What are we gonna do?” I asked.
      “What do ya mean what’a we gonna do? What are you gonna do you moron?” Jack said and rapped his knuckles on the wooden door of the school house as hard as he could, then bolted toward the hedges across the Meetinghouse Road, sayin, “Run son if you knows what’s good for ya!” 


Charleston, South Carolina

From Project Gutenberg’s Peculiarities of American Cities by Union CaptainWillard Glazier; Philadelphia, Hubbard Brothers, Publishers, 1886




                                                                                                          
Chapter Two 

A Disrupted Lesson



I ran as fast as I could, not wishing for master to catch me a’skippin’ school and a’knockin’ on his door like I was a’comin’ a’visitin’ which I couldn’t do now anyway because Jack whacked the door so loud as to be heard unmistakably as a rude intrusion on master’s lesson and so I had no choice-I scampered away like a cat escapin’ from a bulldog.



Monday, January 28, 2013

“They Call Me the Midnight Raider”

(Serialized, the full novel to be published in May, 2013)

        Charleston, South Carolina, 1853    

Charleston, S.C.,  during the Civil War.
 Charleston Harbor
 in background. Civil War
era lithograph
     “Wow Jack! Where did you get that nifty fishing pole?” I asked staring wide-eyed at the long imported bamboo rod that had ten eyelets for the line to pass through and was thick as a large carrot at the fist end and narrow as a green bean at the top. Call me Jeremy. Jeremy Foster. I was his best friend, perhaps his only friend.
     Jack Stone, the cool, collected, braggart, exaggerator, smooth talker, putter-downer and sometimes bully, said he had found it lying on the river bank just a’waitin for him to come along and snatch it and take it home. 


     “It was a’beggin me to take it,“ he said.
     But that wasn't exactly true. In actuality, he stole it out of his grandpa’s store near the slave auction, having broken into it the previous night. The tag was still on the reel. One dollar. “They call me the midnight raider,” Jack said laughing. In several other of his midnight raids, Jack had broken into Mike Hawkins' father's funeral home and  appropriated gold watches, rings and other midnight hour trophies from whatever corpses happened to be  in attendance. “Won’t do’em no good no more nohow,” Jack pronounced with finality of conviction. 

                                          Chapter Two 
             Licorice Sticks and Fishing Hooks


     It was April, 1853, in the heart of the South, eight years before the Civil War, wonderful years for most folks, even for some of the black folks, but many of ‘em didn't cotton much to their lot in life, being slaves and all, and havin' to be sold, or separated from their families, and work the plantations and cotton fields pickin' all day. Charleston was bustlin' with activity and politics.  And not all of the white folks had it easy neither. Many worked in the same fields twelve hours a day. Other black people were free and some even had businesses in Charleston. Me, I was eleven years old and the whole debate about freein' the Negroes or keepin' them slaves or bringin' 'em into the new territories west of the Mississippi just conquered from Mexico didn't mean much to me. I mean, I didn't pay much attention. Those were the good ole days runnin' around with Jack and Mike Hawkins, playin' at adventures and doin' whatever we wanted to do. We were young and the country was young and Jack and me wanted to explore the whole world.
     Stole that pole? No. Borrowed it. That’s the way Jack liked to view the matter. For he fully intended to give it all back sometime. Everythin' he took from his grandpa’s store-all of the fishin' gear includin' the poles, bobbers, hooks, sinkers, lines, the rabbits feet, the coins from the cash drawer, the sour balls, the fire balls, the lemon balls, the honey suckers, the orange, lemon, and lime pops,  the salt candy, the peanut brittle, the licorice sticks, and lemonade jars, not to mention the huntin' gear with boots and a jacket and even a musket. Jack fully intended to return all of it someday. 
    And I believed him. I’d never seen him return anythin' yet but he sounded convincing. He was always borrowin' this or that from somebody who never knew it was Jack doing the borrowin'. And he intended to give back the canoe he borrowed from the old Indian across the river down from the old Smythe plantation - he probably didn't need it anyway, Jack concluded. He’d give that back too if only he could find it. Said he awoke one day in the grass on the riverbank and the darn thing that he left tied to a stick in the mud was gone just like that; said that perhaps the old Indian sensed where it was and took it while Jack was a’sleepin. Indians have special powers of sense and can find anythin' that was lost or taken from them even if it was across a river, Jack said, which it was in this case. Although Jack didn't have much schooling-skippin' out as much as he could get away with and all-he knew a lot about Indians and knew what was what and who was doin' what on the river.

Thursday, January 24, 2013

The Visitor

The continuation of the Novel, "Jack," serialized. Full novel to be published in May, 2013. (Read earlier chapters in the January, 2013, archives above)

 Chapter 17
 The Visitor
                             
Charleston, South Carolina, during the Civil War. 
Charleston Harbor
 in background. Civil War
era lithograph
  
 At four o’clock that day a knock on the door came that I’d been a’fearin' all afternoon. I waited on my belly at the top of the stairs, having earlier decided to stay in my room all afternoon like I was sick. I listened, my ears straining to hear any of the conversation.
     “Good afternoon Mrs. Foster. Sorry to intrude but there was an incident today involving some malicious damage to the school and there is some evidence that, unfortunately, Jeremy may have been involved.”

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

The Novel, "Jack" Serialized - Full Novel to be Published in May, 2013


                                                            Chapter Five 
                                       
                                           Battle of Wits                                                                
                                                                         Gary L Dorion    

          We were keeping low across the cobblestone street waiting for our next opportunity when a carriage stopped right in front of us and obscured our view, then the horse did his business right then and there and, together with the hot noon sun and the wind wafting the aroma our way, we decided to move a bit. So we crawled on our hands and knees along the hedge away from the odor. Then Jack spotted Brooksy a’lyin' on his belly at the corner of the schoolhouse.
          “That knumbskull,” said Jack. “Look at him. Do you see him? What a horse's ass! Trying to spy on us-the damn fool! You seen him?”

Monday, January 14, 2013

My Experience Publishing on Create Space Updated


                  Designing a Book Cover

                              By Gary Dorion 

   

                                

The original post was published a couple of months ago but I decided to update it.

Update:

           Well, for Book 1 of my upcoming trilogy, "Jack," I decided to go with a professional illustrator from Georgia (not the state but the country near Russia and Ukraine). She's currently illustrating the cover and then needs to illustrate at least ten other pages for Book 1 so I won't reveal her name just yet. She has enough work to do at the moment. When the cover is complete - any day now I suspect - I'll post it on my Wordpress site or this one or both.  I'm curious to see how people will respond to her work.

 Although I had a wonderful children's illustrator - Jennifer Taylor of Victoria, B.C. - for my book, The Lucky Lobsters, (second ed. published last month) and would encourage anyone looking for a children's illustrator to contact her, I thought I needed someone with experience illustrating adult fiction. Like me Jennifer is a diver and so has this great sense of the underwater world.  That was a big factor in hiring her. Just thinking about diving and I cannot wait to return to Jamaica, St. Thomas or Costa Rica - even Thailand although I dove in the wrong places there. Don't dive around Coral Island because - although the name sounds great - there's not much coral left. Phi Phi Island (not too far from Phuket- is much better. Anyway, I'm excited at the prospect of helping to bring back the great illustrated novel mode of the past and my Georgian illustrator is excited about the work. A good and possibly great illustrator who is excited about the content - must be a winning combination. However, some if not many of the world's great novelists didn't sell many books until after they died - what a drag! Anyway, below is the original post. One of the reasons I'm reposting this old post is that I read one of the more expert bloggers recently who blogs about blogging and he said don't let your old posts - which may be jewels - wallow in the past. Repost. Good advice I thought. 


 That's me in Thailand. You can see my wife -- well just part of her cheek (I had to cut her out of the photo because the content (I forget what it was) required just me). 
Okay, here she is (she's cuter than I am, I know).

 That's Uraiwan when we were exploring some 2nd Century Hindu caves in India a few years ago.



             

 Original Post:

           You want your book to sell in big quantities, right?  In my last post I discussed the importance of perfecting    (as much as is practical) your novel or soon-to-be-published book on your hard drive before uploading to Create Space. This post is about cover design-in particular, whether or not you should fork over hundreds of dollars for a professional illustrator to design your cover or if you should undertake that project yourself. A good cover can help sell your book as it is the first thing that a reader will see. First impressions can be a door opener or a door slammed in your face. 


The Hot Foot and More

by G. Dorion

               Once upon a time, there was a student who refused to sit where he was supposed to sit, balked at the idea of keeping his mouth from flapping when he was supposed to keep his mouth from flapping, and, all around, was quite an annoyance to other students-not to mention his poor teachers.
               One day after the boy flapped his jaws too much and to the wrong people and at the wrong time and to the great irritation of everyone around him including his teacher-not to mention the boy's recent and persistent bullying of certain other boys-the present adolescent company included-the students decided to act.
               Their plan was to silence him and perhaps to 'teach him a lesson' so to speak, and this they did, dear reader, but it was the way they did it, calculatingly, cunningly, in a manner that was utterly surreptitious, stealthy and cruel, and in a way that no-one, except for me, could finger them, and so that no evidence trail would lead to them, that was the most remarkable.

Saturday, January 12, 2013

Jack - Sample Chapters of My Upcoming Novel


  "A man never rises so high as when he knows not whither he is going.”                                              
                                                             - Oliver Cromwell      
                                                                              - 
                                                  JACK
                              Charleston, South Carolina, 1853

                                   The Battle is Joined  
   
            Crawling up alongside the red wooden façade of the schoolhouse, Jack and me peeked through the windows and scanned the room. There was Mike seated on one end of a bench, paying the strictest attention to master’s lesson.
            “The sniveling little worm,” Jack said, scrunching up his nose. “I knew he didn’t have the nerve to skip,” said Jack. “Next, he’ll be kissing Whittemore’s ass-the little worm.”
            “What are we gonna do?” I asked.
            “What do ya mean what’a we gonna do? What are you gonna do you moron?” Jack said and rapped his knuckles on the wooden door of the school house as hard as he could, then bolted toward the hedges across the Meetinghouse Road, sayin, “Run son if you knows what’s good for ya!” 


Charleston, South Carolina

From Project Gutenberg’s Peculiarities of American Cities by Union CaptainWillard Glazier; Philadelphia, Hubbard Brothers, Publishers, 1886




                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        
      Chapter Two
                                    A Disrupted Lesson

            I ran as fast as I could, not wishing for master to catch me a’skippin’ school and a’knockin’ on his door like I was a’comin’ a’visitin’ which I couldn’t do now anyway because Jack whacked the door so loud as to be heard unmistakably as a rude intrusion on master’s lesson and so I had no choice-I scampered away like a cat escapin’ from a bulldog.

Thursday, January 10, 2013

No Exit: The Lucky Lobsters & Why I Wrote This Book

The inspiration behind this full-color children's book is based upon a harrowing scuba dive in some northern Atlantic waters. Be sure to read the five star New York City teacher reviews at the end.

  
                                                       NO EXIT

     The Lucky Lobsters was inspired by a somewhat harrowing but humorous incident involving some very lucky lobsters. Some years ago, I was diving alone (not recommended) in some northern Atlantic waters when I came across a string of lobster traps all of which had several lobsters inside. The ocean floor there was about 40 feet deep. The water was cold but I was getting comfortable in my wet suit as my body heat warmed the water inside the suit. I didn't plan this mass escape but, when I found them, hopelessly trapped, there was only one thing I could do.


Saturday, January 5, 2013

The Schmaltzer: Pay Up or Take the Train to Treblinka


   By Gary Dorion

       
           It was difficult enough for a Jew to survive in the Warsaw Ghetto-established not long after the German occupation of Poland in 1939. But many Jews had to leave the ghetto for Aryan Warsaw either legally (with a pass) or illegally to get food or check on loved ones in hiding or to try to get weapons from the Polish underground armies. Many also never lived in the ghetto or had escaped from the ghetto and were hiding in “Aryan” Warsaw. When they ventured out into the city they entered a minefield of risk where Schmalzers-the unscrupulous ever-vigilant blackmailers of Jews-were on the hunt. "Pay up or take the train to Treblinka."